This poem is created yesterday. got kinda alittle drunk, and wrote this when i was feeling alittle down....
turned out not bad...
This is a new type of poem I was trying to create. Looks like my past poems on the outside but actually it's not. Because of the half-drunk state, there were a few errors. but overall it should be easy to understand. One have to read beyond what it's written in a poem.
(Here Goes)
Ice keeps going down my throat,
Still I wonder why I'm still afloat.
Tears continues to flow down,
Intensive coldness making me drown.
I don't seem to be able to forget you,
Little do I know what I should do.
Over I keep telling myself,
Vows already made to the unhappy elf.
End is not near that's what it told me,
Yellow I wished my life would be.
One couldn't escape the black aura,
Underneath everything's always another dark era.....
Written & Created by J.C.T.H
(END)
If ya can understand what this poem's purpose or meaning, EVEN WITH THE ERRORS in it, then I say u're observant.
